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Post by Toni on Mar 3, 2009 18:46:51 GMT -5
This is a poem that will always be with me. I wrote it when my old best friend, Paige, abandoned me because I was going through depression, which I still am. I entered it into an online contest, and was published in a book called collected whispers. It was put on the first page. This poem was writen about a year ago and has applied to many points in my life. I hope you like it, please comment >.< The River's Eye
After Night, Before the dawn, We stood together, Best Freinds Forever.. And now you've left, I know not why_ Do you find pleasure when I cry?
Darkness conquers All my life, I'm so depressed, I must confess_ Despite the black waters, And deadly tides, You rode the currents To its heart, And flood the mighty River's Eye..
And that is why, Its soul_ Its being_ And everything That longs for meaning_ Is carried away by the river, And simply dies..
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Post by Shadow on Mar 3, 2009 18:49:46 GMT -5
Woah.. -jawdrop-
That's deep.. O.O
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Post by Toni on Mar 3, 2009 18:52:50 GMT -5
Thanks -blushes-
I should show that to meh English teacher she'll love me rofl
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