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Post by Toni on Feb 5, 2009 22:20:45 GMT -5
Hey everybody! I'm writing a book, so here it is.. [note: I add on to my story and edit it often, It'll be awhile before I finish] prologue Breathe. That is the only thing I can do, the only thing in my control. I've had so much taken from me, so much to live for, but am left with only the repetitive motion of breathing. That is my meaning, my purpose, my life. I sit, think, and breathe. Sometimes I stand.. yet I always end up falling. Have you ever been in complete darkness? Were you afraid, unable to think of anything past what may lurk in the shadows?That would feel great right now. When you've been surrounded by the same pale color for five years, you tend to crave the opposite of what has been given to you. If you aren't able to with take the magnitude of what I'm about to say, leave now. I don't want to hurt your narrow minds. As for the rest of you, congratulations for making it past the prologue, because my story is taking off in- 5.. Now's your last chance 4.. I'm warning you 3.. Go no further 2.. If you're still here 1.. Get ready for the ride of your life 0 Let us begin[so that's my prologue, please comment!]
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Post by Toni on Feb 6, 2009 23:26:39 GMT -5
Yeah, I made this reply so people would see the thing that says 'new' next to it so they'll read my prologue, now somebody comment! Darn, I can't stop talking in second person! NO-OO-OO-OO-OO!!!
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Post by Shadow on Feb 7, 2009 15:38:33 GMT -5
=D I like it
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Post by Toni on Feb 12, 2009 23:30:32 GMT -5
I modified my prologue again
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